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GUNSHOTS: Orgasms And Guns...* A Dark Romance, Erotic, Action Story (20+) - Literature (13) - Nairaland 293t66

GUNSHOTS: Orgasms And Guns...* A Dark Romance, Erotic, Action Story (20+) (63255 Views)

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Lutherblaq: 7:35am On Aug 14, 2023
Abdulreheem:
op more in to ur elbow
Thanks mah gee
ghettochild(m): 9:35pm On Aug 14, 2023
Keep it up..
But some description are unnecessary..
Just talk bout what the subject does or is about to do..
Don't give details on how the character is going to do something....
I'll go back to the stories and highlight those things I observed...
They are in every chapter.
It's not really needed.
sheba222(f): 9:16am On Aug 15, 2023
We're patiently waiting.
softy(m): 9:26am On Aug 15, 2023
Lutherblaq:


Thanks mah gee



Well done, Great job.
Please, keep up the tempo.
softy(m): 9:37am On Aug 15, 2023
ghettochild:
Keep it up..
But some description are unnecessary..
Just talk bout what the subject does or is about to do..
Don't give details on how the character is going to do something....
I'll go back to the stories and highlight those things I observed...
They are in every chapter.
It's not really needed.


As an ardent reader of stories by great writers on this forum since 2006, I am of an opinion that those descriptions are necessary to buttress a perfect point he was bringing out at a particular paragraph he was explaining or next paragraph he would explain. It is necessary to show the in-depth of how each actions (affection, hatred, skills, romance, jealousy, intrigues, being surprised, secrets, fights, boldness and cowardliness just to mention a few) performed by "who" contributes to a particular chapter and also defines what you should be expecting in the next chapter. These "unnecessary descriptions" are what make the stories thick!







anyways!......what do I know?

grin grin grin

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slimsophiediva(f): 10:22am On Aug 15, 2023
Lutherblaq:
am coming tn update

The fact that I’m writing exams and still checking for updates is surprising šŸ˜‡šŸ˜‚
Pinkdimples: 7:48pm On Aug 16, 2023
Why am I not seeing update post but just your name and when I click no post from you? Or is your updates hidden? Is it only me? @ Lutherblaq
sheba222(f): 8:14pm On Aug 16, 2023
Boss man we're still waiting oooo, wetin the happen?
do4luv14(m): 9:00pm On Aug 16, 2023
Pinkdimples:
Why am I not seeing update post but just your name and when I click no post from you? Or is your updates hidden? Is it only me? @ Lutherblaq


Not only you, I had been refreshing since,,

seems spambot delete the post
Pinkdimples: 9:13pm On Aug 16, 2023
do4luv14:



Not only you, I had been refreshing since,,

seems spambot delete the post
You should mention the s in charge of literature section to help you out @Lutherblaq
Pinkdimples: 10:54pm On Aug 16, 2023
The good s of Literature section Divepen1 Obinnau pls help look into this. Lutherblaq keep getting banned anytime he posted an update. Thanks as we await a positive response. šŸ™šŸ™šŸ™
LarryCork: 12:13pm On Aug 17, 2023
slimsophiediva:


The fact that I’m writing exams and still checking for updates is surprising šŸ˜‡šŸ˜‚

helo I use to be a millionaire way back & I hav moiney.please are u intaressted in doin housegirl work paying a cool 25k (25,000 naira).it's a shance for u to make moiney.u want?(no oofencse)? smiley
slimsophiediva(f): 2:31pm On Aug 17, 2023
LarryCork:


helo I use to be a millionaire way back & I hav moiney.please are u intaressted in doin housegirl work paying a cool 25k (25,000 naira).it's a shance for u to make moiney.u want?(no oofencse)? smiley

Work on your English first before employing an house maid
Your mother will fit into the job description tho

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Pinkdimples: 2:35pm On Aug 17, 2023
slimsophiediva:


Work on your English first before employing an house maid
Your mother will fit into the job description tho
Don't take him serious dear,he is well known in some sections on nairaland with different names,with such deliberate english quoting ladies anyhow.

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do4luv14(m): 3:00pm On Aug 17, 2023
slimsophiediva:

Work on your English first before employing an house maid Your mother will fit into the job description tho
see Finishing, remind me not to find you wahala 😁😁😁😁

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LarryCork: 3:49pm On Aug 17, 2023
slimsophiediva:


Work on your English first before employing an house maid
Your mother will fit into the job description tho

calm down woman.dont u want moiney. u tink u all dat..have u even beento london? I go to london anyhow. U should show respet to londoners.goat. insted of using a shance to make moiney, u are abusin me like ilitarates person. women want moieny.dont u want moiney?cant u be nice?real ladies dont cuss. u are not a lady..and then u complain u cant find man on nairaland.shame on u 20 times.its not yor fault. I am not going to help u anymore...village woman!!!!(no ofeincse) angry
LarryCork: 3:59pm On Aug 17, 2023
slimsophiediva:


Work on your English first before employing an house maid
Your mother will fit into the job description tho

Ok I for give u.wot if I pay u 30k(30,000 naira),will u do house girl work wit a uniforms & food includin? Be nice. U want? smiley
Lutherblaq: 8:35pm On Aug 17, 2023
GODZILLA'S HIDEOUT
Godzilla will be meeting with The Hunters today, and they're starting to arrive. Shark is supposed to be in the neon room already, but she's currently in front of the main mansion. It's where Godzilla stays, and no one has ever seen him come out of the building. He has just one month to get all the needed info about him for Toxica, else his mother is gone. He might be able to scale through, but he'd lose the mother he started this job because of...
All his efforts will be in vain, and that'd be f**king disastrous. He's a lunatic when it comes to combats, but not in front of Toxica who trained for twenty years. With the little she showed him at the hospital, she'd probably break him in half so easily, she's not a plaything. He inhaled as he looked at the mansion again, then he went closer and took a deep breath.

He raised his hand to the knob, but immediately he touched the glass, he got electrocuted, and he fell on the stairs, rolling back to the ground. He stayed unconscious for three minutes, and when he finally opened his eyes, he couldn't stand...
"Why act like you don't know the rules here? No one gets inside!, and if you have a request, meet in the neon room or special room!" Godzilla's voice came from an unknown source.
"I'm...I'm.. sorry... boss" Shark muttered weakly.
"Get to the neon room in ten minutes" Godzilla said.
TEN MINUTES LATER NEON ROOM
Shark inhaled when he came in and met all The Hunters in attendance, well except one, the closest to Godzilla who rarely attends meetings.
"The only sure thing about The Terminator's revenge right now is that it's connected to the operation at Hope Hospital twenty five years ago, our biggest operation" Godzilla's voice boomed.
"And why is she revenging for that?" A Hunter asked.
"That's not important right now, the most important is that she cleared two of The Hunters who carried out the operation already, and she's left with two..." Godzilla replied.
"That includes me" a female voice said, obviously Yenicall Ortega.
"And the bastard who's not here, you both need some extra carefulness from now on, pending when she'd strike again" Godzilla said.
"I can take care of myself" Yenicall said.
"Alberto and Sancho died!" Godzilla yelled.
"And that's because they were specialised. Alberto could only combat with a weapon, without a weapon, he's powerless, and that goes with Sancho too, I trained for years, so getting to me will take lots of efforts, in the actual fact, I can't wait to meet her" Yenicall grinned.

NAVAL HOSPITAL
Tiger entered Chance's ward and met his eyes opened for real, he's sitting up in bed. Toxica is still beside him though, smoking silently.
"I know you'd have been wishing for me to die, I woke up an hour ago and you're just coming? More reason to hate you, bastard" Chance rolled eyes, and Tiger sighed as he sat beside him.
"Sure, I wished for you to die, and I'm f**king disappointed right now, seeing you alive" he said.
"Partire (leave)" Chance rolled eyes again.
"e se non lo faccio? (what if I don't)?" Tiger muttered.
"figlio di puttana (motherf*cker)" Chance talked back.
"Grazie, coglione(Thanks, douchebag)" Tiger finally smiled and hugged him, but he pushed him away immediately.
"You think I was joking when I said I hate you?"
"You called me my name when you were dying, and now you're being a jerk?" Tiger whispered.
"I've always been a jerk" Chance replied, and Tiger touched his hair, but he pushed his hand away again.
"Are you bastards always like this?" Toxica talked, and they both faced him.
"Yes!" They chorused, and Toxica chuckled, dropping her cigar stub in the ashtray before standing.
"I'm done here, I'm returning to my hotel, but you guys should expect a visitor in the clan tonight" she smiled.
"Visitor?" Chance muttered, but Tiger kept quiet as Toxica walked out of the ward. Chance got down from the bed after removing his drips, and he put on his shoes, walking out of the hospital. Tiger sighed and followed him. They drove back to the clan, and immediately they came out of the car, Taylor and Zenith hugged Chance at once.
"Oh..oh!" He laughed, hugging them back.
"I know you guys missed me, but isn't this love too much? I look like a celebrity here right now" he said funnily.
"Man! You got me worried!" Zenith pulled his cheek.
"I have the knack for getting people worried, mad girl" he smiled, facing Taylor.
"You have nothing to say to me?" He blinked.
"I'm glad to have you back,..here" she said awkwardly, and he hugged her again.
"I won't take that for a welcome back speech, write me another" he whispered in her ear, and she smiled as they broke the hug. Both Taylor and Zenith stood on his sides as he walked to his apartment, and Lambo bit her lip. It's obvious... Zenith likes Chance.
"Isn't it time for the briefing about the next mission?" Tiger asked.
"Yes boss, after me please" Lambo replied and led the way to the lab.
JEZEBEL'S APARTMENT
The notification for the briefing chimed on Jezebel's phone, but she couldn't even stand, she's dealing with severe pains in her tummy right now, just like the other time during the mission.
"Did I get food poisoning again? I only took bread" she muttered with her pale lips as she struggled to stand from the ground, but she couldn't.
"F**kk me!!! My tummy!!!" She cried out, holding it so tight. She was sweating and shaking as the pains dealt with her, but the worse happened when blood dropped out of her nose to the ground.
"No! What the f**k! Arggggg!!!"
LAB
Everyone except Chance and Jezebel were already present when Toyota came in. She scanned through the room, and immediately she saw Tiger, she glared, and he smiled in return, ing what he did to her in the morning. She'd probably hate him more right now, but he likes it, she won't be able to handle it for long anyways, she'd come for him by herself, she'd crave so bad for him till she'd appear at
his doorstep. He's patiently waiting for that time.
"It's understandable that Chance is still healing, but why the hell is Jezebel not present?" Lambo said.
"Overlook it, not like she'd still be alive during the mission anyways" Toyota said firmly, and all eyes turned to her, but she never blinked as she rested her palms on the table.
"Some top trainees are ing the gang soon, before the next mission" she announced, and
Jaemin smiled. That includes Tequila for sure, his major f**kmate.
"Yenicall Ortega, a drug dealer who owns various cartels in the Underworld, she's our next piece of cake" Tiger said in Toyota's voice, and Sylvester covered his mouth to contain his laughter.
Toyota glared at him, and he smiled again, obviously teasing her... he's enjoying her glares, it's turning him on.
"There are several drug cartels in the Underworld, 500+ the last time I checked" Zenith said.
"True" Lambo added.
"She's one of those 500+, all you both need to do is fish her out. She'd probably hide herself, cos by now they'd have caught on that this revenge is cos of Hope Hospital operation" Toyota said.
"Do we really need to search the whole underworld? We deal drugs too, and we've got dealers, all we have to do it query the surest" Tiger said, and Taylor clapped.
"Bravo! Boss you're the real deal! I and Chance will take care of it" she smiled.
"Chance still needs rest, so we're doing it together" Zenith replied.
"Chance said it himself that he has rested enough" Taylor said.
"And I'm saying he needs the rest, don't argue we're doing it together" Zenith replied.
"What's going on?" Sylvester muttered.
"Isn't it obvious? A triangle" Jaemin smiled.
"Shitty" Sylvester muttered. Lambo looked at Zenith who's still glaring at Taylor, and she bit her lip hard again.
"I'm handling it with you guys, no further talks" Tiger said.
"Yes boss!" Taylor and Zenith chorused.
"I'm handling it too, the next batch of drugs" Toyota said.
"Yes boss!" Taylor and Zenith chorused before they knew it, and they looked up at once.
"Huh?" They chorused again, looking at Tiger and Toyota. Toyota glared at Tiger and walked out of the lab, then Tiger followed.
"What just happened?" Jaemin muttered.
"Hey, Lambo" Sylvester touched Lambo's arm, and she shoved him away.
"Know your place" she glared and looked at Zenith before walking out. Sylvester kept standing speechlessly.
"Got shouted at?" Jaemin laughed, resting his arm on his shoulder.
"F**k away" Sylvester glared.

^
Tiger was still rushing to catch up with Toyota when a new figure appeared in front of them, and immediately he saw him, he stopped. Toyota stopped walking too, looking surprised as she stared at him, the visitor Toxica was talking about...his worse enemy back then in Atlanta. For every love story, there's a villain, and for theirs back then in Atlanta, he's the villain...
FLASHBACK YEARS BACK IN ATLANTA
Young Toyota was walking down the terrace with her sword in hand when Tiger appeared from a room and grabbed her second hand with an handsome smile.
"Let go of my hand, godmother must not see us this way" she snapped her hand away from his grip, but he grabbed it immediately.
"Denzel...
"No one is here, please let me hold your hand till we leave this terrace" Tiger begged, and she looked at his eyes.
"You're so childish, you don't deserve to be the strongest here" she muttered, and Tiger smiled before leaning in to kiss her lips.
"Denzel!" She pushed him.
"We kissed last night, don't act cold" he winked naughtily, and she bit her lips before walking away.
"Wait Rachel!" He ran after her to grab her hand again, but immediately he did, someone entered their middle, knowingly separating them so they broke apart. It's Brazil, Toxica's only son who's lethally obsessed with Toyota.
"Brazil?" She said.
"Mother wants you" he replied with a smile, and without waiting, Toyota ran off. Immediately she went out of sight, Brazil grabbed Tiger by the throat and hit his back onthe wall, punching him thrice on the face. He's a little piece of cake for Tiger, in fact the only person he's stronger than here is Lambo,so he could kill him right now, but he dare not touch him, he's the godmother's son anyways, the alpha here.
"Bra, are you pained that I kissed my love?" Tiger laughed stubbornly. He was already bleeding as Brazil brought his evil face closer...
"How dare you kiss her lips! How dare you Denzel!!!" He roared, stabbing him in the stomach.
"Ahhhh!!!"
FLASHBACK ENDS
That's right, it's exactly him, right in front of them... Brazil. He's smiling so wide as he walked to Toyota and hugged her tightly...
"What the...f**k!"
Tiger pulled his gun without waiting, and he shot without thinking. The bullet hit Brazil's right arm, and he let go of Toyota immediately he began bleeding. Toyota smirked and looked at Tiger who's still pointing the gun at Brazil. Brazil held the bleeding arm, looking at him shockingly, but it wasn't over, cos Tiger pulled the trigger again, and this time, it hit Brazil's shoulder.
"Dammmnn!!!!" He groaned, going on his knees.
"Tiger, f**king stop!" Toyota shouted and made to touch Brazil...
"Touch him again, and I'm planting another bullet...in his heart this time, I swear to gawd..."
Tiger muttered darkly, looking mercilessly dangerous like he's wounded. How dare he touch his Rachel?? The Denzel who takes shit from him in Atlanta is dead, now he came back as Tiger. Tiger versus Brazil... Game on.

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Abdulreheem(m): 9:05pm On Aug 17, 2023
welcome back op
Pinkdimples: 9:50pm On Aug 17, 2023
I'm glad you can post now, welcome back and thanks for the sweet update.
slimsophiediva(f): 9:24am On Aug 18, 2023
Thank goodness that you are back
LarryCork: 11:59am On Aug 18, 2023
slimsophiediva:
Thank goodness that you are back


So u been dreaming about me....keep wasting Yor times cozz am taking. anyways did I mention I drive BMW & am a Londoner..juss in case u ask! smiley
sheba222(f): 4:31pm On Aug 18, 2023
Welcome back,Tiger wan kill person because of touch and hug ,no wonder Toyota wan kill tequila over hand touch.These 2 people na wa
Pinkdimples: 8:00pm On Aug 18, 2023
sheba222:
Welcome back,Tiger wan kill person because of touch and hug ,no wonder Toyota wan kill tequila over hand touch.These 2 people na wa
The two bosses don de kolo 😁😁
Lutherblaq: 7:46am On Aug 19, 2023
Am sick, so i won't be posting today sad
Calenikan(m): 8:03am On Aug 19, 2023
Sorry baba

Wishing you quit recovery



Lutherblaq:
Am sick, so i won't be posting today sad
Abdulreheem(m): 9:18am On Aug 19, 2023
get well soon bro
we are missing u already
Pinkdimples: 9:55am On Aug 19, 2023
Lutherblaq:
Am sick, so i won't be posting today sad
sorry dear. Get well soon ā¤ļø
slimsophiediva(f): 11:13am On Aug 19, 2023
Lutherblaq:
Am sick, so i won't be posting today sad

Quick delivery ijn

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